假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Yesterday morning, I heard a piece of news which my friend Li Lei was admitted to the hospital because of the car accident. The day before yesterday, Li Lei is going to a bookstore to buy a book. He was very carefully when he got to the crossroads. He crossed the street when the traffic light turned to green. However, if he just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared at his right-hand side and came directly towards him. The driver drove fast and it was too late to avoiding it. Li Lei was knocked by the car. She was carried to the hospital immediately and had a surgery. Last night, I visited him. He looked pale unless he was out of danger.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分TodayIamtalkingtomydadMatthewmyhero.ThereasonwhyIadmirehimisbecausehestartseverydaywithsmilE.Andhissmilealwaysbringshappytomyfamilies.Hehasbeenlookedafteruscarefullysincemanyyearsago.Heoftenencouragesmetokeepgoingandnotgiveitup.What’smoreherealdoescareandshowhislovetoeveryonehemeets.Ibelievethatheisatruepersonofcompassionorcarefulness.Hehadsomanygoodpersonalqualitythatweallrespecthim.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThereusedtobeafactorynearmyhousE.Thefactorymanagerwasblamingbythegovernmentbecauseofthepollutionhadharmedpeople’shealth.Buteventhenhepaidnotattention.Thenthefactoryforcedtostopproduction.ThemanagersaidangryIsthereanyfactthatwehadharmedpeople’shealthyet?Infactwehaven’t.Justthenadoctorcamewiththeresultofamedicalexaminesayingthemanagerwassufferingfromcancer.Thisisveryclearthatthepollutionhasharmednotonlyotherpeople’shealthandalsothemanagerhimself.Atlastherealizedanimportanceofkeepingtheairclean.

假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分IwasreadinganarticleinabookwhileIcameacrossawordIdidn’tknow.Dadwhatisthemeaningoftheword?Mydadasheusualdidafterworkwaswatchinghismostfavoriteshow.Youhavethedictionarydon’tyou?heshotback.Hedidn’tevenlookupmyfacE.Iwentbackmyroomandthereonmystudytableisthatdictionary.Ilookeditupandfoundit’sexactmeaning.TenyearhavepassedandIstillusethatdictionaryalongwiththelessonIreceivedearlierinlifefrommyoldman:tobeindependent.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分IhavelearnedEnglishformanyyearsbutIdon’thavearealchancespeakbeforeforeigners.LastweekIhappenedtomeettheforeigner.HebadlyneededmyhelpandIfeltsoexciting.OnMondayIwenttotheflowersshoptobuyaflowerformyfriendMarybecauseshewasill.Iwasgoingtothehospitaltoseehim.Intheshopaforeignerandthebosswashavingaconversationsothebossdidn’tknowwhattheforeignersaiD.IhesitateforawhilethenIcametohelptheboss.Thebossandtheforeignerthankedformesomuch.IfeltsohappythoughthelanguageIlearnisuseful.SincethenIhavebeendeterminedtolearnEnglishwell.

假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearLiHuaIamgladtoreceiveyourletter.Icanunderstandhowsadyouareastheyhavetotransfertootherschool.Buteverythingwillbefinewhenyouadapttoyournewsurrounding.Inyourletteryouaskedmeaboutmyfirstschool.InmymemorymyfirstschoolwasverylargewitheachclassroombeautifuldecorateD.TherewasabigsquareliesinthecenteroftheschoolyarD.AndIcouldhavegoodviewofthesquarefrommyclassroomwindows.MyfavoriteteacherwasmyEnglishteacherwhichwaspatientwithmE.BesidesIhadmetmybestfriendPeterintheschooltowhomIstillkeepintoucheventhoughweareindifferentschoolsnow.Ihopeyouwillmakenewfriendsbutenjoyyourtimeinthenewschool.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分EnglishhasalwaysbeenmymostfavoritesubjectsoIsignedupfortheschoolEnglishspeechcompetitionwithhesitation.SinceIwasconfidentthatIwouldwinaprizeeasyIdidn'tspendmuchtimegetmyselffullyprepareD.HoweverassoonasIsteppedonthestagewordescapedmE.Asresultmyperformancecouldn'tbeworsE.TheunexpectedfailurebroughtmyselfendlessregretandshamE.JustthenmyEnglishteachercametomeandsaysPridecomesbeforeafall.IwasdeeplytouchedbyherwordsthatIwouldtreasureforever.Indeedthecontestwasnotonlyashocktomeandaharvestaswell.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearschoolmatesInordertogethighschoolstudentstoattachingimportancetotheenvironmentandraiseourawarenesstoprotecttheenvironmentandChinaDailyisplanningtoholdaninterestknowledgecontest.A.conteststartsonOctober14thandendon31st.RememberyoucantakethecontestinChinaDailynewspaperthatisverypopularamonghighschoolstudent.TheanswersheetmustcutfromthenewspaperandsenttoChinaDailyafterthedeadlinE.PleasepaymoreattentiontotherelatedinformationofthecontestandtakeanactivepartinthemontimE.Students’Union

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分I’mwritinginresponsetoyourtroublE.Don’tbeinbadmooD.Foranewcomeritmaytakeyouaperiodoftimetoadaptyourselfinit.Howeveryouhavetofacewithit.Thatwillbehelpfultocommunicatewithyourclassmatesvoluntaryandjoininsomesocialactivities.OnlybydothiscanyougottoknowmorepeoplE.Besideitmayalsobeagoodideatohelpothersthatcanshowthemyouarewarm-heartedandfriendly.WithtimegoesonI’msureyourclassmateswillliketomakefriendswithyou.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分SomephoneshadbecomepartofourdailylifE.Nomatterwhowearewecanseepeoplebusyplaywiththeirsmartphones.Smartphonesbenefitthem.Theyhelpusescapethepressureoflifeandgetinformations.Howeverifwespendtoomuchtimeonthemwewon’thavetimetocontactfacetoourfriendsandfamily.Andourlifestudyandworkwillbehurt.Inmyviewweshouldlimittoourusingsmartphonesexceptforapurposeoflearning.Meanwhileit’sabsolutenecessaryforustotakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LadiesandgentlemenThankyouforholdsuchawonderfulpartyformebeforethedayofyourreturningtoAustraliA.Ireallycan’tthankyouenoughforthatyou’vedoneformeduringmyvisit.IrememberedvividlythedayIarriveherE.Iwasdeeplyimpressedbyyourkindnessorthebeautifulsceneryofyourcity.EverythingwasmorewonderfulthanvisitingthesplendidMountHuangonthirdday.AndthememorywillsurelylastalifetimE.I’malsogladtohavemademanyfriendsheretowhomIhopetoseeagaininthefuturE.IbelievethisvisitwillpromotethefriendshipandunderstandingbetweentheAustralianandChinesestudent.OnceagainIwanttoextendmymostsincerelygratitudetoallofyou.Thankyou.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共10处语言错误每句最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分WiththedevelopmentofmoderntechnologythereareaplentyofwaysforustocontactpeoplE.WeChatisprobablyourfavoritemainlybecauseofitsconvenient.WecankeepincontactwithfriendswheneveritisandwhereverweareaslongasWi-FiisavailablE.Anotheradvantageisitisarelativecheapandquickwayofcommunication.Asmessagesgetsendandreceivedinstantlythecostofmakingphonecallsiscutdown.BesidesmusicaswellaspicturesandvideosareoftendownloadedthroughWeChatbutitisnowausefulentertainmenttool.HoweverproblemsexistatthemeanwhilE.Forexampleyouridentitycanbeeasilyrevealedsoweshouldpayattentiontoprotectourpersonalinformation.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分WhenIwasalittlegirlmyfamilywereverypoor.Myparentswereworkersbutcouldn'taffordtobuytoysformE.Asaresultmydollslookedalotdifferentlyfromthatboughtfromtoystores.Mydollswerehome-madE.ThefirstdollIownedwasmadeofaglassCoca-ColabottlE.1wassoexcitedtomakeadollbymyown.SoonIbecameacollectorofemptyCoca-ColabottlesalthoughIsaweachbottleaspossiblebabydollatthattimE.PeoplewhoworkedinthestoresellCoca-Colacouldseemepickupemptybottlesalmosteveryday.Thosehome-madetoyshadbroughtmealotofhappy.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThismorningIwasjoggingintheparkwhenIcaughtthesightofawalletonabench.Ipickedupandcheckedthecontents.InsideitIfoundsomemoneyoracardwithaphonenumber.BelievethattheownerwouldbeworriedIimmediatelytriedthenumber.A.mananswereditinanamazingvoicE.HearingthatIhadhiswallethesighswithreliefandtoldmehewouldreturnrightaway.TenminuteslatethemanarriveD.AfterconfirminghewasanownerIhandedthewalletbacktohim.WithhisthumbupheexpressedhisgratitudetomerepeateD.SeeingthesmileonherfaceIfelthappythatIwasabletohelp.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Inrecentyearsmoreandmorecollegestudentinourcityhavebeentakingadvantageoftheirsummervacationtodovolunteerworkinforeigncountries.AsstudentreporterIinterviewedoneofthemwhomsharedherexperiencE.ChenYingasecond-yearEnglishmajorwenttoEgyptonitsownasavolunteerworkerinlatelyJuly.ShetaughtEnglishtochildrenorbecameinvolvedinactivitiesrelatingtoprotectingwomen’srights.Shefoundmanylocalgirlswerenotabletorecognizetheirownvalueandgotunfairtreat.ShejoinedinpartnersfromallovertheworldoncampuslecturetoursaroundEgypt.Inhersparetimeshevisitsthepyramidswithothervolunteers.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MybrotherDonalddidn’tdowellinmath.WhenthedayoftheexamcomesDonaldsatnexttoBrianwhichwasalwaysgoodatmath.DonaldcarefulcopiedBrian’sanswers.Atendoftheexamtheteachercollectedthepapersandgradedit.ThenshedecidedtogiveaprizetothestudentwhogotthehighgradE.ButitwasabitofdifficultforhertomakeadecisionbecauseDonaldandBriangotthesamegradE.TheteacherthoughtaboutthatandmadeonhermindtogivetheprizetoBrian.Donaldsaiditwasunfair.That’struetheteachersaiD.ThereforeBrian’sanswertoQuestion18was‘Idon’tknow’.Yourwas‘NeitherdoI.’.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearPeterHowtimesflies!IthadbeenalmostayearsinceyouleftChinatoSweden.Duringyourhomestayatmyhomewehadsuchwonderfultimethatitseemedasifeverythinghadbeenhappenedyesterday.Ihavebeenlongtohearallaboutyouandmissingyousomuch.FortunateIwasselectedasoneofthestudentrepresentativetopayavisittoyourschool.ThevisitwilllastonJuly7thto20th.AndasasupersoccerfanI’dreallylovetovisitourlocalsoccercluB.Ican’twaitforthedaytocomewhereIcanseeyou.YoursLiHua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分WhenIwasachildthereweresonseasonaljobseekerinmyvillagE.Onedaymymotheraskedmetoinvitethemformeal.AtthethoughtofmakinganopenfireoutsideatmiddayandIfeltveryupsetly.Ididn'tmanagetohidemyfeelingstomymother.AfterservedthegroupsheaskedWhydidyougetsuchangry?Iusedtheheatofthefireandthesunasanexcusefortheirrudebehavior.ShegavemeafirmlooksayingYoucanneverpredictwhatevertroublemaylieaheadofyou!SuddenlyIrealizethatIwaswrong.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LastweekendafterpayavisittothecityofNewYorkIvisitedtheSmithsonianInstitutionsNationalAirandSpaceMuseumwhereliesinWashingtonD.C.Themuseumwhichcoversaareaof18000squaremetersismadeof24exhibitionhalls.Allkindsofplanesrocketsmissilesandspaceshipofgreatimportanceandvariouslyoldinstrumentsthatfamouspilotsandastronautsusedareondisplay.InadditionIseecopiesofsomesatellitesandaircraft.MoreinterestinglyItriedoperatingonsomeaircraftbymyself.DuringthevisitItooklotsofpicturesaswell.Thisbriefvisithelpedmyselflearnmuchaboutthehistoryofhuman'sspaceexploration.Itmadememoreinterestinginscienceandtechnology.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ImadeabigmistakeinthechemicallessonlastFriday.Whenwewereinthelabmyheadwasstillfilledwiththeinformationsofafootballmatch.Sawtheothersbeginningtheexperiment.IjustcopiedthemwithoutconsideringthattheteacherhadsaiD.AllofthesuddenthematerialinthecuponmydeskwascaughtfirE.Iwasshockedanddidn'tknowwhattodo.Unluckilymyteacherhelpedmeputoutthefireonsandquickly.IfeelveryashameD.NotuntilthenIrealizethatcarelessnesswasharmfulinsciencE.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分IaswellasmyfamilyaregoingtoNewYorkCitythisweekenD.IhadbeenlookingforwardtogothereforalongtimE.ItisoneofthemodernistcityintheworlD.Therehavealsoalotofmuseumswhereyoucanlearnsomethingyoucan’tlearnitinschool.I’dalsoliketoseetheStatueofLibertyandtheEmpireStateBuilding.FortunatelythetwintowersdestroyedonSeptember11th2001orIwouldhavethechancetoseethembymyself.NowIamgettingreadyfortheexcitedtrip.IbetitwillbeaunforgettableexperiencE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Inourlifewewillbenicetoanotherpeoplewhilewhenfacingourparentswearepatientandevenarguewiththem.Peoplealwaysthinktheirparentsdon’tunderstandthemandrefusetotalkingtothem.Theyshowtheworsttempertotheoneswholovethemandtheyshowtheirkindestfacetostranger.Itisasadthingandthereasonwhichpeopleshowtheirbadnesstothedearestisthatpeoplejustgetusedforthepresentationoftheirrelatives.Theyareknowintheirheartsthattheirparentswon’tleavethemnomatterwhichtheydo.Peopleneglectedthefactthatourparentsarethedearestpersonsintheworldsoweshouldbenicetoourparents.

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阅读下面短文根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要AccordingtoastudyattheUniversityofMarlandMedicalCenterinBaltimoreresearchersfoundthatpeoplewhohadagoodsenseofhumorandlaughedalotnotonlyathomebutalsoatworkhadfewerheartproblemsthanpeoplewholaughedlessandlaughingpeopletendtolivealongerlifethantheoneswhoarenot.AfterreadingplentyofinformationaboutthebenefitsoflaughingandacarefulstudyofpreviouspapersinthisareaadoctorinIndiastartedalaughtercluB.Dr.MandanDamaris'slaughterclubquicklygrewinto1800groupsthroughoutIndiaandover6000aroundtheworlD.ThelaughterclubhadeveninspiredWorldLaughterDaywhichpeoplecelebrateonthefirstSundayofMayeveryyear.InstructorsattheclubsgetpeoplelaughingnotonlythroughjokesbutthroughsimplelaughingexercisesForexampleinstructorsandparticipantsrepeatthechantho-ho-hoandha-ha-hatogether.What'smoreparticipantsalsodotheLionlaughbystickingouttheirtonguesandwavingtheirhandsaroundtheirears.Otherexercisesfocusonbreathingandsimpleyogaexercises.Inawordalltheactivitiesthatcancauselaughareincludedintheclubs.TheselaughterclubsareverypopularinhospitalsandnursinghomesnowadaysinIndiawhereparticipantscanforgetabouttheirachesandpainswhilelaughing.Itseemsthatlaughingmaybejustasimportantaseatingrightandexercising.NoteveryonecanjoinalaughterclubbutweallcantakepartinthesamepracticE.Accordingtothedoctorbesidestakingpartintheclubseveryonecandosomethingtomakethemselveslaugh.Howcanyoumakelaughingapartofyourdailyroutine?Ifyoufeelfunnyaboutjoiningalaughterclubyoucanrentafunnymovierememberafunnyexperiencedosomesportsgotothezoowatchthemonkeysorevenjustmakeyourselflaugh.YouwillnotbeabletokeepastraightfaceallthetimE.Sodon'tworry;behappy.Laughalittleandlivelonger.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Onedayayoungmanwhomcouldn'tgetbackhomecameintomyofficetoaskforhelp.HesaidhismotherwasdisableD.Hisphonehadstolenwithhiswalletandhehadn'tcontactedherforthepasttwodays.Howeverhisjobwasassessinghousingapplicationsnotprovidemoneyfortravel.IaskedhimtowaitoutsideunlessIfinishedmywork.AfterworkIdrovehimallthewayhomE.Wearriveathismother'shouseat10:30p.m..Shewasinawheelchairandsheansweredadoor.IsawtearsinhereyeasshethankedformE.IjusthopedthatifmysonexperiencednothingsimilarsomeonewouldbenicelyenoughtobringhimhometomE.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分EveryweekendItookmychildrentothepark.Ithinkit’sagoodwayofthemtomeetotherchildandmakefriends.Theyloveplayontheswingssotheyarealwaysveryexcitingwhenwegotothepark.Theyalsolikeplayinghide-and-seekwithmylittlefriends.Ioftenmakesomecakessothatthechildrencaneatwhentheyishungry.Weoftenhavearestonthegrassandhavethelunchtogether.Thereissmallpondwithalotducksinthepark.Allthechildrenhavegreatlyfunfeedingthempiecesofbread.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线/划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分YesterdayIsawtheoldladyfalldownwhenIwashurryingtoschool.Iwasabouttohelpherupwhilesuddenlyapasser-bystopmesayingthatImightbeaccusedofknockingherdown.HeardhiswordsIbegantohesitateandslowdownhersteps.Atthesametimeanotherstudentthatsaweverythingandwentuptohelp.Theoldladysaidnothingbutlotsofthanktothegoodboy.IfeltashameD.AsisknowntoallhelpingothersisforeveragoodvirtuE.Eventhoughsomeoldpeoplearebecomingimmorallywecan’tletittodisappear.IhavemademymindthatIwillreachoutmyhandwithouthesitationnexttimE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Inlifewemakemanydecisionssomeofwhataresoimportantthattheyaffectusgreatly.MylatestdecisionismadewhenIenteredSenior3inMissZhang’sclass.SinceIwasnotgoodinEnglishMissZhangaskedmetolistenattentiveinclassandputdownsomenotes.ThereforeIwasneveragoodlistener.IwentoninmyownwayignorehersuggestionscompletelyuntilMissZhanghadtalkwithmE.Hemademerealizetheimportanceofnote-taking.FromthisexperienceIhaverealizedagooddecisionbenefitsfrompeoplE.Weshouldlearntotakeothers’advicesanddotherightthings.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加把缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LastyearduringthesummerholidayIfoundpart-timejobworkedinatoothbrushfactoryatnight.NotuntilIexperienceditdidIrealizedthatitwasnoeasyjoB.1wenttoworkwhenmyparentsweregoingtobeD.OnthemorningwhenmyparentsweregoingtoworkIcametohometosleep.ThisbackwardschedulewasverytoughformethatIoftenfelttiring.ButIamgladthatIhadthisunforgettableexperiencE.NotonlyisitfuntoriseandshinealongwiththemoonorstarsbutalsoIhadlearnedtoappreciatethehardworkofthosewhichareworkingwhiletherestofusaresleeping.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ItisoneandahalfyearssinceIhadleftthejuniorhighschool.HoweverthereisonethingwhatI’llneverforget.EverydayourteacheraskedsomeofustogiveanEnglishspeechinfrontoftheclassmatE.IfeltworriedbecausemyspokenEnglishwaspoorersoIturnedtoMissLeeforhelp.Shegivesmenotonlysomevaluableadvicebutalsoencouragement.ShesuggestedIspentsometimepracticingeveryday.IfollowedhisadvicE.WhenitwasmyturntomakethespeechIspokeveryconfident.Andmuchtomyjoymyspeechwasgreatsuccess.ThroughthisexperienceIknowwhenwehavedifficultyweshouldneverbeafraidtoaskotherswithsomehelp.

DearMr.LiHowiseverythinggoingwithyou?IamwritingtotellyouthegoodnewsthatIhavealreadybeenadmittingintoBeijingUniversityinadvancE.ActualspeakingyouareverypersonIshouldfirstsaythanksto.ItisyouwhohashelpedtodevelopmyinterestinEnglish.WithyourhelpIwouldnotbegoodatEnglish.Somygratitudetoyouwasbeyondanydescription.BeijingUniversityismydreamplacethatIcanenrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmyhorizons.IamsureofthatIwilllearnalottherE.Iwillalsotakepartinallkindsofactivity.Iknowyouarealwaysbusywithyourteachingwork.Dotakecareofyou.Mayyouandyourfamilybehealthyandhappyaswell.Bestwishes!YoursLiHua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第1l处起不计分DearMumandDadInLondonatlastwearehavinggreattime!Tostayinahotelinanoldcastleandwetriedtomakeareservation.Howeverthathotelwasbookedfull.Soinsteadwegetacoupleofbedsinadormitory.StayinadormitorywasalotoffunbecausetherewerelotsofpeoplefromvariousplacE.IfyouhadcomewithoutusyouwouldhaveenjoyedEuropeeither.AllofthepaintingsI’veseensofarisfantastiC.NowIthinkvanGoghishisfavouriteartist.IsthereanythingspeciallyIcanbringyou?LiMing

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改l0处多者从第11处起不计分ThismorningmyfriendMaryandmewentshopping.ShethoughtitisagoodchancetopracticeChinesE.Marywashappytotalktothesalesgirlsandsodidthey.ShewantedtobuysomechickensosheaskedforasalesgirlHowmuchisthecock?GentlethesalesgirlansweredI’mnotsurewhetherit’sacockorahen.MarybecameembarrassingandrealizedshehadmadeamistakE.AllofuslaughedincludeMary.Thenwewenttobuysomeeggs.IaskedMaryDoyouwantbuyhens’sonsanddaughters?MaryshoutedIcansayeggs.Welaughedagain.Howaninterestingshoppingexperience!

文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号/\并在其下面写上该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下面画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Mr.Yueismyhistoryteacher.Heis1.75metersintheheight.HewasborninNovember41966.HegraduatedBeijingUniversityin1990.Aftergraduationhebecomesamiddleschoolteacher.Hehasbeentaughthistoryfornearly20years.Heisverysuccessfullikeateacher.Hehasbeengivealotofhonors.HenotonlyisagoodhistoryteacherbutalsospeakEnglishandJapaneseverywell.Hehasmanyhobbies.HelikesreadingbookscollectstampsandlisteningtomusiC.AlsoMr.Yuewaskind-hearteD.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LastnightastrongwindaswellasaheavilyrainstruckourareA.Newscamethatthetreesintheparktwokilometersawayfromourschoolwasblowndown.Thisafternoontheysetofftheparktodosomecleaning.Theheadoftheparkmetusorgaveussomeadviceonhowtoclearawaythefallingtreesbranchesandleaves.Sometimeslaterwewereworkinghardwhenitbeginstorain.Becausefewofushadtakenalongumbrellasorraincoatssowewereallwet.A.rainlastedaboutanhouranditwasapitythattheyhadtostopourwork.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Iusedtobeaphysicianatahospital.Ioftentreatedchildrenwhohadpoisonedbymedicinewitholderfamilymembers.Thechildrendidn’tknowthemedicinewasdanger;theyjustknewittastedsweetly.ChildreneasilyopenthebottlewhatwenowuseinChinA.SomedaysbeforeItalkedaboutmedicineswithanAmerican.HeshowedmeasortofplasticbottlE.ThedesignwasquitesimpleandI’msureourChinesefactoriescanproducethesebottles.Thetopofthebottlecanbeopenedbypressingdownonthemwhileturningwhichisdifficultformostyoungchildrentodosothoughgrown-upcanopenthesebottlesveryeasily.I’mcertainthattheexpenseofmakingsuchtopswouldbeverysmall.AsadoctorI’dlovetoseethisdoing.Andmostparentswouldbegrateful.Sincerelyyours

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MyparentshavedecidedtotakemetopayavisitforBritain.Iamexcitedhopetomakeagooduseofthisopportunity.FirstlyIwilltalktonativespeakersasmuchasIcanimprovemyEnglish.SecondlytherearemanyplaceofinterestthatinterestmealotincludingBigBenwhichdatedfrom1858.BesidesfootballthatispopularinEnglandismyfavoritesport.IhavebeendreamingofwatchingalivingfootballmatchtherebutnowthedreamwillcometruE.MyfriendAlicelivesinLondon.Iwillprobablymeetwithhim.IamsurelwillhaveagoodtimetherE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分InthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthdayItookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.BeforegettingintothecarIthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorderssoonceIstartedthecarmymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.TheinstructorkeptrepeatingthewordSpeedup!Slowdown!Turningleft!IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.A.fewminuteslatetheinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroaD.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改l0处多者从第11处起不计分DearMaryI’mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowwestudentsusetheInternet.AsweallknowtheInternetisplayingaimportantpartinourdailylifE.WeoftenreadnewsathomeandabroadandlearningforeignlanguagesbyourselvesontheInternet.Sometimeswesente-mailstoourfamiliesaswellasourfriends.Besidewelistenmusicenjoyfilmsandplaycomputergamesonit.Wecanevendoshoppingwithoutleavingourhomes.Howeverithasitsdisadvantages.Wewastetoomuchtimeplayingthecomputergamesthathasabadeffectonourstudies.What’sworsethebadinformationontheInternetdogreatharmtothem.IhopewecanmaketheuseoftheInternetproperforourstudies.Jennifer

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两赴每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号八并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearJackIampleasingtohearfromyouandknowthatyouhadagreatlytimeworkingpart-timeinafast-foodrestaurant.NowIwouldliketoshareyourworkingexperiencewithyouduringthepastsummer.InthebeginningofthesummervacationIwashiredasshoppingguideinabigsupermarket.IstoodfortenhoursadayandsmiledtoeveryoneIhavemet.SometimesIwaslaughedatandmostofthetimeIwaspraisedformywonderfulworksbymanypeoplE.HalfamonthpassedquicklyafterIknewitandIlearnedhowtodealwithdifferentpeoplE.AboveallIhavelearnedthatsmileisthekeytosolveanyproblem.Bestwishes.YoursLiMing

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均只限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearTomI’dliketosayanythingaboutthedinninghallserviceinmynewschool.IngeneraltheserviceissatisfieD.Thehalliscleanandtidy.ButthedisheslookinvitingandtastegooD.What’smoretheworkerstheretreatustheirfriendswhichmakesusrealhappy.Howeverthecostofthemealswasalittlehigh.Alsowehaveonlyalimitedvarietyofdishwhicharethesameeveryday.InadditionweoftenhavetostandwithlineforalongtimeafterwegetourfooD.ItwastesalotoftimE.Ihopesomethingcanbedonetosolveabouttheseproblemssoon.Howaboutyourschoolmeals?Lookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.YourstrulyLiHua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearAliceIwasdelightedtoreceiveyourletter.ThankyouontheEnglishdictionaryyouboughtitformE.Ireceiveditthismorning.ThereisnodoubtwhichitisofgreathelptomE.I’mdeepgratefulforyouradvicethatIshouldpaymoreattentionstopractisingmyspokenEnglish.I’vemadeupmymindtospeakEnglishbothinandoutofclass.NextmonthI’lltaketriptoAustraliawhichisorganizingbymyschool.IhopeIcanpractisemyspokenEnglishthereasmanyaspossiblE.BythewayIamsendingyouasetofstampswiththisletterbutI’llsendyoumoreifIgotany.Idohopeyouwillhaveagoodholiday.YoursLiHu

51.XieLei'spreparationcourseishelpinghertogetusedtotheacademicr要求ofaWesternuniversity.52.XieLeihighlyr推荐it.53.ButIwasalsoverynervousasIdidn'tknowwhattoexpectXieLeitoldmewhenIsawherwaitinginaq队伍atthestudentcafeteriabetweenlectures.54.Mademeverythoughtfulandt感激formylifetoday.55.Theindustryb繁荣attractedEuropeansincludingmanyJewishpeoplE.56.From1882to1940AngelIslandwasafamousimmigrationstationwheremanyChinesepeoplea申请forrighttoliveinUSA.57.BythetimeCaliforniae选举tobecomethethirty-firstfederalstateoftheUSAin1850itwasalreadyamulticulturalsociety.58.Firstlygardenersuseitallthetimetoproducec商业的quantitiesofplants.59.Cloningplantsiss直接的whilecloninganimalsisverycomplicateD.60.Butatlastthedeterminationandpatienceofthescientistspaidoffin1996withab突破-thecloningofDollythesheep.61.OntheotherhandDolly'sappearanceraisedastormofo反对andhadagreatimpactonthemediaandpublicimagination.62.Theadvantageisthatifthereisanewillnesssomeoftheseanimalsmaydiebutotherswillsurviveandpassontheabilitytor抵抗thatdiseasetothenextgeneration.63.Alleffortsofcloningananimalwillbeinv徒劳ifthereisnotenoughdiversityinthegrouptoovercomeillnesses.64.Herewasachanceformetodistinguishmyselfbyinventingsomethingm仁慈的thatwouldcatchsnakesbutharmthem.65.OfthefirstSpanishtogotoCaliforniathem大多数werereligiousmenwhoseministrywastoteachtheCatholicreligiontothenatives.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文作文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearTomI’mgladtoacceptyourlastletter.Thanksforyourconcernabouttheheavyhazeaffectingnormalteachingactivitiesinourschool.WehaveactualtakenseveralpracticalmeasurestohandlE.Tobeginwithattachgreatimportancetothehealthoftheyoungourgovernmenthasfixedasetofequipmentstoprovidefreshairinourschoolthatcanbasicallysolvetheproblem.Inadditiontoparentsdonatelotsofairpurifiers.Howeverinsidethebuildingsofourschoolwedidhavefreshandrefinedair.Besidestheseourschoolavoidsoutdooractivitieswhenhazeattacks.IdobelieveadisturbingissuewillbesolvedprettysooninChinA.YoursLiHua

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改温馨提醒改错题需按要求规范答题否则不能得分！增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LadiesandgentlementodayI’mgoingtosharesomethingamazedaboutdolphins.Foragesthesailorshavesaidthatitisgoodlucktoseedolphinsswimmingalongsideboats.Theirpresencemeantthatlandisnearwhichwillbevitalinformationsifaboatanditscrewareindanger.Somedolphinshaveevenprotectedsailorswhichsuffershipwreckfromsharks.Thereisnowonderthattheseuniqueandfascinatingcreatureshavelongknownasourfriends.Dolphinsarethoughttobeintelligentanimalsbecauseofitsquickabilitytolearn.Theyseemtocommunicatewitheachotherthroughacombinationofwhistlesandclicks.Whilescientistsdon’tknowexactwhattheyaretalkingaboutitisthoughtthatdolphinsaretellingeachotherthatfoodisnearbyorwarneachotherofapproachingdanger.

增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线____并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MybrotherTomwasveryselfishwhenhewasalittleboy.HedidnotwantsharethingswithotherpeoplE.ForexamplewhenheboughtachocolatecakeheputtheminasecretplacewhereIcouldn’tfind.Thenheateitallbyhimself.Heneverhelpedother.Hesaidheisbusy.Thatisagameoftennismakinghimverybusy.Hedidnotcareifsomethinghedidmadepeopleangry.Forinstanceononenightheplayedstrongandloudlymusictillfouro’clockinthemorning.Butheisdifferencenow.Heoftenhelpsgrandmawithhouseworkhelpsmomwithcookingandhelpshisclassmatewiththeirlessons.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearHarryIhavegoodnewsforyouthattherewillbeainternationalmusiccampinourcitythissummerThecampisopenlytostudentsfromallovertheworldwhoisinterestedinplayingmusicalinstruments.Iknowyouareamusicloversowhynottojointhecamptogetherwithus?AtthecampcampersaregivingclassesbyexpertsinthemoringandintheafternoontheydoacoupleofhourofpracticE.Intheeveningthereisamusicexchangeconcertthatcamperscangiveperformancesandplaysdifferentkindsofmusicfromtheirowncounties.I’msureyouwillhavealotoffunstherE.I’mlookingforwardyourreply.YoursLiHua

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下面划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处不计分I’mCindyastudentforelectronicengineering.Totelltoyouthetruthitwasn’tmychoice—itwasmyparents.IwantedtostudypsychologyandtheysaidIwouldn’tgetthegoodjoB.IwishIwillnothaveacceptedbytheschooltodoengineering.I’msittinginthelibrarynowandIoughttobedoingsomephysicsproblembutinsteadI’mreadingErichFromm'sEscapefromFreedom.Ithinkmyparentsshouldreadthisasgoodsotheywouldunderstandusbetter.

下列句子共有10处语言错误每句中最多有一处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LastSaturdayourschoolhadorganizedanactivitytovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanagE.AsoneofthevolunteerItookpartinit.Wetookmanybooksaswellmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoystothechildren.Theyweredelightingtoreceivethegifts.InthemorningweplayedsomegameswiththemwhenweusedtoplayinourchildhooD.ThenwecookedandhadlunchherE.Intheafternoonwegavethemsomeperformances.Beforeleavingtheorphanagewehadphotostakewiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailssothattheycouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.EachofushadahappilytimE.WegavethechildrenourcareandhelpbutinreturntheygaveustheirsmilesandlovE.

—IfeelterriblE.Ididn’tdowellinthemathtest.—________.You’realreadymakingprogressandwillsurelylearnitwell.

增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThismorningIwenttoanearbyfoodstoretobuysomebreads.AfterthemaninthestorepackingthebreadinasmallbagformeIbegantowalkhomewithbaginmyhanD.OnthewayImetmynext­doorneighborMissWangthatwaswalkingherdog.Wegreetedwitheachotherandbegintotalkabouttheweather.Asweweretalkinghisdogcameupatthebaginmyhandthoughthebreadgaveoffadelicioussmell.Asaresultsomeofthebreadfelltothegroundorthedogbegantoenjoyit.FiveminuteslateIwasbackatthestoretobuybreadagain.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中10多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词刪除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Asisoftenthecasewhenpeopleareattendingtomeetingshavingmealsorwaitingforbusesyoucanalwaysfindthemaddictingtotheirphonesrcompleteignoringothers.ThiswasreallyacommonphenomenoninourlifE.ThereasonisbecausesmartphonesnowadayscanbeusedforpeopletoplaymobilegamesandkeepintouchwithfriendsthroughQQandWeChat.Howevertoomanyexposuretophonesisbadforpeopleintermsofhealthy.Moreoverpeopleengagedinphonesfailingtocommunicatewellwiththosearoundthem.AsfarasIconcernedpeopleshouldus«phoneslohelpwithmyworkandstudyandcaremoreabouttheirfamilyandfriendsrutherthanmobilephones.

56U_____________someofmyclassmates'narrow-mindedparentsmyparentsaretolerantofmychoiceofmusicasmymajoratcollege.Theycanreallyunderstandmyinterest.57Whatmyfathersaidtomethatnightleftadeep_________________印象onme.58Idon'tknowtheexact______________地点wherethethinghappened.59Smokinginthepublicplacehasbeenbannedbecauseitish________________tootherpeople'shealth.60Bystudyingthet_________________culturewearegivenachancetoknowourcountryanditssplendidculture.61Withoutadriver’sp________________youarenotpermittedtodrivethecar.62Thehousewasfinallysoldoutata__________________合理的price.Bothsidesarequitesatisfiedwithit.63Thenshefoundherselfs__________________byreporters.64Itwasraininghard.You'dbetterstayathomeinordertoavoid________受伤65Itishightimethatweshouldtakem_________________toprotectendangeredanimals.

假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号/\并在其下面写出该加的词删除多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Everyoneinourvillagelikesmyfathersohehasasenseofhumor.Intheotherwordshecanmakepeoplelaugheasyandtheyfeelhappytobearoundhim.AdmiredhisgoodpersonalityisthemainreasonformetodreamthatonedayIcanbeashumorashim.IevenaskedhimhowhaveagoodsenseofhumorbutwhathereplieddisappointedmE.NoteveryonecanmakeotherlaughbecausethosethatareofhumorareusuallyborntobesohesaiD.HoweverlaterheaddsButyoucanifyouknowalotofjokE.That’swhynowI’mreadingbooksaboutthem.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MyneighborTrevorwasveryseriousaboutsport.Inthemorningheusualgoescyclingbuthesometimesgoesswimmingattheswimmingpool.Atworkshedoesexerciseduringhiscoffeebreaksandhesometimesplaysgolfinhisoffice!Inlunchtimeheplaystennis.Thenintheeveninghepracticesjudo柔道forhourortwoatthesportscenter.AttheweekendhealsodoessomuchsportaspossiblE.SheplaysfootballonSaturdaysandbasketballonSundays.Intheholidayshegoesskiinginthewinterorsailinginthesummer.HeisamanwholovesportmorethananyoneIhaveeverbeenseen!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Asweallknoweveryonehaveadream.IhavedreamedofbeingadoctorsinceIenteredintotheprimaryschool.Nowadayswithmodernlifegorapidlymanypeoplesufferfromdifferentkindofdiseasesbothmentallyandphysically.AsaresultdoctorsareingreatneedathomeandabroaD.Mydreamistobecomesuccessfuldoctorhelpingtosavepeople’slives.AlthoughtobeagooddoctorwasverydifficultIwilldowhateverIcantokeepeveryonehealth.TomakemydreamcometrueIhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI’llconcentratemoretostudies.AfterallonlybyworkinghardlycanonesucceeD.

增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下面划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词Postcardalwaysspoilmyholidays.LastsummerIwenttoItaly.Ivisitedtomuseumsandsatinpublicgardens.A.friendlywaiterteachesmeafewwordsofItalian.Thenhelentmeabook.IreadalittlelinesandIdidnotunderstandaworD.EverydayIthoughtaboutpostcards.MyholidayspassedquickbutIdidnotsendsomecardsformyfriends.OnlastdayImadeabigdecision.Igotupearlyandboughtthirty-sevencards.IspentthewholedayinhisroombutIdidnotwriteasinglecard!

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文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Areyoulookingforsomethinginterested?Wouldyouliketogiveahandtootherpeopleinyoursparetime?Thenjoiningusandbeavolunteer!Wehavejobforpeopleofallages.Anyonefromstudentstooldpeoplecanbecomeoursmembers.Youcanhelppeopleinmanyways.Someschoolsneedvolunteerstohelptakethecareofchildren.Volunteersareneededinhospitalshelpthepatients.Animalloverscanhelpsavedogsandcatswithouthomes.ThereisnothingforeveryonE.IoftenplayedcomputergameswhenIwasfreelybeforE.NowIhelpoldpeoplelearntousecomputerssaidavolunteeraged18.Unlesseveryonehelpsoutalotwe'llallhavebetterandwarmerworldtolivein.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的同下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Itseemsthatiftheresultisbadwhichpeopleworkforwillbemeaningless.Personallyspeaktheprocessoffightingforthegoalislessimportantthantheresult.Whenwefightforourgoalswewillbedevotedwhatwearedoingandtrytoimproveus.IfwefailintheendwhenwelookbackonthebeginningwewillfindthatwearenolongerthechildishonE.Wehavegrownup.What'sthemoreintheprocessoffightingwegotclosetosuccessasthesayinggoesthatfailurearethemotherofsuccess.Sodon'ttreattheresultsoserious;justenjoytheprocess.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分RecentlyIhavetakenquiteainterestincooking.Isuggestthattheschoolorganizesacooking-learningactivitytoteachstudentstoprepareanydeliciousfooD.ItcanbereallyfunandIbettherewillbealotcommunicationgoingonwithstudents.Besidesit’sagoodwaytobuildupteamspirits.TheschoolcanevenholdacompetitiontoseewhomcancookthemostdeliciousfooD.MuchimportantlyIthinkcookingisavitalskillforthepeoplenowadays.Whatisknowntoalleating-cookedfoodisamuchmorehealthyandlittlecostlywayoflifethaneatinginarestaurant.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分OneyearagoIhadaspecialEnglishlessonholdattherailwaystation.ItwasquitedifferentfromtheregularEnglishclasseswewerefamiliartoforwehadnotextbooksnoblackboardornofixedseats.GatheringattheentranceofthestationwetoldtocollectasmanyEnglishwordsandsentencesaspossibleherE.CuriousandexcitedwewalkedaroundthestationandlookedeverywheresearchforanyinformationinEnglish.WheneveranEnglishwordcomesintosighttheclasswouldburstintothecheersasifwehaddiscoveredanewworlD.WiththeChinesetranslationandvividlypictureswecouldfigureoutitsmeaningwitheasE.NowthisunforgettablelessonstillencouragesmetobeanactivelearnerwhereIgo.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改一下你同桌写的作文.文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改.增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词.删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉.修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分.Onedayanoldmanwasreturninghomeaftershopping.Suddenlyabagofwastefellintheskynearlyhittinghimonhishead.Hewasgreatlyfrighteningbytheunexpectedincident.Droppedthethingshehadboughttothegroundheranawayrapidly.Whatdangerousitwas!Obviouslytheaccidentcausedbyacarelessneighborlivinghighlyinanapartment.Itwasthatpersonwhomwastoblame.Everyoneofusshouldbehavepolitelyandthinkmoreaboutother.Onlywhenweeachbehavedproperlycanoursocietybechangedintoapleasingone.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分RecentlypeopleweremovedbyastorytakingtheplaceinThailanD.IttoldaboutagirlwhomhadaquarrelwithhermotherandranawayfromhomE.Afterseveraldaysthegirlwalkedintoarestaurantinhungers.Amanwhowasthecookinviteshertositdownandthenmadesomedeliciousfoodforhim.Thegirlwasverysurprising.Thenthecooktoldthegirlthatawomantookaphotoandaskedhimwhetherheseenthegirl.Butthewomangavehimsomemoneytocookforthegirlifsheturnedup.Untilthenthegirlrealizedhowgreatlyhermotherwasandsheshouldbegratefulonher.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecitylastweek.IwassurprisingtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountrysidE.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexamplE.Wesupplypreciousflowertothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthem.Theirfamily’sincomereachedasmuch100000yuanlastyear.Notonlydidtheyhaveahouseacarandcomputerstheycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.WhenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmosttheysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.TotheirdelightedmycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromtheuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastradE.

Thedrughasa________有益的effectontheimmunesystem.71.Thecity___________occupybytheJapanesearmyduringWorldWarII.72.---Wheredidyoumeetyourfriendsyesterday?----Atthehotel______theystayeD.73.____下定决心的toovercomeallthedifficultiesonhisownTomdidn’tturntoanyoneforhelp.74.Howdoyouthinkyoucankeepyourself________motivatewhenlearningEnglish?75.Asateachersheneverlosesher________热情forteaching.76.Ifyouwanttokeephealthyandenergeticyoushouldkeepa_______均衡的diet.77.OnSundayabackpack_________containseveralbombswerefoundatatrainstationintheAmericanStateofNewJersey.78.Ihadgreatdifficulty________achievetheproject.79.Theelectricdoorsopened______自动地asweapproacheD.80.Werushedtothestationonly______tellthetrainhadalreadyleft.81.Ifeelitanhonor_______asktospeakherE.82.Afterschoolwewenttothereading-roomonlytobetoldthatit_______decorate.83.Thethreeofus______travelaroundEuropeforaboutamonthlastsummer.84.---Look!Someone______breakthewindow!---Wellitwasn’tmyfault.Ididn’tdoit.86We_______workonthisprojectforfourhours.Let’shavearest.87.---HiTracyyoulooktireD.----IamtireD.I_____paintthelivingroomallday.88.---Canwemeetat5o’clock?----It’sabit______convenienceformE.Let’smakeit6o’clockOK?89.Heissaid________studyEnglishLiteraturebeforE.90.It’snotwhatyousaybutwhatyoudo_______matters.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者不计分PerhapsthemostinterestedpersonIhaveevermetisProfessorLiwhoteachesChineseinourschool.Iwasimpressedbyhisdevotiontheteachingprofession.Sincemylectureswerealwayswell-preparedandclearlydeliverstudentsallenjoyedhislectures.Furthermorehecouldexplainnewideasinacreativeway.Irememberveryclearlythatonceheevensingsasonginclasstoillustratingapoint.IadmiredthefactthathewoulddiscussproblemsforstudentsoutsideoftheclassroomortalkwiththemonthetelephonE.Hewouldeasilymakefriendwithstudents.BesidesIwasattractedbyhissenseofthehumor.Heoftenmadeourlearningmoreenjoyably.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分IthasbeenthreemonthsbeforeIleftmyjuniorhighschool.BesidesthereisonethingthatI'llneverforgetaboutit.ItwasmytumtogiveanEnglishspeechinclass.IfeltworriedbecausemypoorspokenEnglish.SoIwenttoMissLeefarhelp.Shenotonlyencouragesmebutgavemesomevaluableadvices.AndthenIspentnearlytwohourspracticeitathomeeveryday.Tomygreatjoymyspeechwasthegreatsuccess.Itwastheteacher'sencouragementwhohelpedmegetcouragE.ThroughtheexperienceIknowwhenwehavedifficultyweshouldneverbeafraidtoaskotherforhelp.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词1.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分AlthoughIwanttogetalongwellwithmyclassmatesbutIcan’tbecauseIamveryquiet.Ican’tfindwordstosaywhenothersaretalkingwiththem.I’mveryimpressingbytheboysandgirlswhoalwayskeeptalkingandsmiling.Iftheworldwerefullofpeoplewhoarealwaystalkeditwouldbeaverynoiseplace!IknowsomepeoplearequietwhenothersliketotalkalotthatmakesaharmoniouslifE.AndIwillknowmyclassmatequitewellsolongasIfindconfidencetotalkwiththem.ButIfeellonelyintheclassbecausemyquietness.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Gettingridofthebadhabitofprocrastination拖延症isnowmygoalinlifE.Myfirststepwastosetsmalltargetswhatcanbereachedrealistically.ForexampleIplantosetatimetableformystudy.SoafterschoolIwillputfinishinghomeworkinthelastplacE.AdditionallyIwillmakealistofmyimportanttaskincludingtheirduedatesbutfollowmyschedulestrictly.Iwillavoidfindexcusesforputtingthemoff.AtsametimeIwillaskformyfriendsandparentstohelpmE.ByachievingthissmalltargetsIhaveconfidentthatIwillovercomeprocrastination.

假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Notonlydoourparentsgivelifebutalsogaveusendlessloveandsupport.I’mverygratefultomyparents.TheygivemesomanyloveandsparenoefforttosupportmE.OnceIwasseriouslyilltheyweresoworriedandalmostwerekeptmecompanythewholenight.NowI’minSenior3.Luckilyformyselfmyparentscanunderstandmystressfulconditionandoftencommunicatewithmewithencouragedwords.HowevertheygivemeenoughpersonalspacethatIappreciatesomuch.WhatIshoulddonowistostudyhardly.WhenIgrowupIwilltrymybestmakemyparentslivetheveryhappylifE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Timeflies!ItisalmostayearwhenIcametostudyinNo.1MiddleSchool.IrememberwhenIfirstcometotheschooleverythingwasnewtomE.NowIhaveusedtoeverythinghereandlikemyschoolverymuch.AskedhowIlikeitsomuch.I’dliketoletyoutoknowIhavegoodteachersaswellasagoodatmospheretostudyin.Myschoolhasalonghistory.Threeyearsagoitcelebratedtheir100thanniversary.InrecentyearsgreatchangeshavetakenplacE.Eachclassroomhasbeenequippedwithnewmultimediaequipmentswhichmakesitpossibleforteacherstoteachefficientlyandstudentstolearneasy.IntheyearstocomeanewbranchschoolwillbeonconstructioninthewesternareaofthecitywhichissaidtobecompletingbySeptemberin2018whenitwillhaveabetterconditiontowelcomemorestudentstoreceiveagoodeducation.

106.AfterstudyingmanysuccessfulpeoplethroughouthistoryIhavefoundthatthereareanumberofcommon______特点theyallshareD.107.Swimminghelpstogettheblood_________循环throughthemusclesthusconsideredthemostvaluableaerobicexercisE.108.Therewasalong____________间隔beforeheansweredthetelephonE.109.Hefeltdiscouragedtofindhimself_____________反对byhisowndeputy代表110.Itisdangerousto________步行人todriveonthepavement.111.Atthattimethetrainnotonlyc____________passengersbutalsogoodstodifferentpartsofthecountry.112.Inthisjobexperiencecountsformorethanpaperq____________.113.Shebroughtthreechildrenupaloneoftenatgreatpersonals________;sheseldomhadachanceforrelaxation.114.Thecompanyhasannouncedthatitwillu_________afullinvestigationintotheaccident.115.Thedrugwasw_____________fromsaleafteranumberofpeoplesufferedserioussideeffects.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计Thewinterholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathomeitiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.ButinthatcasewewilllearnlittleaboutworlD.Ifwegoonatripabroadwecanbroadenyouviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.IthoughtthatitisagoodideA.Itdoesnotcostmanyyetwecanstilllearnalot.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写Goodrelationshipsbetweenteachersorstudentsareimportanttoteachingandlearningonlywithgoodrelationshipscanstudentandteacherscooperatewell.Goodrelationshipsdependedonbothsides.Ontheonehandstudentsshouldrespectteachersandourhardwork.TheyshouldpoliteCoteachersandreadytofollowingtheiradvicE.Onanotherhandteachersshouldbekindlyfriendlyandpatienttostudents.Theymustberesponsibleontheirteachingandhelpstudents.Ifbothsidestreat10eachotherinafriendlywayteachingandlearninginclasswillbehighlyefficient.

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