假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Life is full of ups and downs but it is never too easy to achieve success. As an English saying went, “Failure is the mother of success.” I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. After the match, I was confident that I would win. However, I faileD. How sadly I was! Luckily, my P. E. teacher helped me out. He told me not to lose my heart. He also helped me my skills. With her help, my confident returned and I came up with several new ideA. The next day, though I had to play against another more skilled boy, I beat him! So don’t be afraid of failurE. If we can deal with it good, failure can be the mother of success.

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Asisoftenthecasewhenpeopleareattendingtomeetingshavingmealsorwaitingforbusesyoucanalwaysfindthemaddictingtotheirphonescompletelyignoringothers.ThisisreallyacommonphenomenainourlifE.ThereasoniswhysmartphonesnowadayscanbeusedforpeopletoplaymobilegamesandkeptintouchwithfriendsthroughQQandWeChat.Thereforetoomuchexposuretophonesarebadforpeopleintermsofhealth.Moreoverpeopleinvolvedinphonesfailtocommunicatewellwiththesearoundthem.AsfarasIamconcernedpeopleshouldwiselymakeuseoftheirphonestohelptheirworkandstudy.Meanwhilecaremuchabouttheirfamilyandfriendsratherthanmobilephones.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LadiesandgentlemenWelcometoourEnglishCorner.ThisCornerwassetupthreeyearsbeforE.EverySundaymorningstudentsfromdifferentschoolsandsomeforeignersoftentookpartinit.GatheraroundherewepracticespokenEnglishbytalkabouteverythingweareinteresteD.WealsoexchangeourexperienceinEnglishstudy.WeallhaveagoodtimeherE.Thousandsofpeoplehavebeenherewhenitwassetup.WethinkthattheyhavelearnedalotbytakingpartinactivityherE.ItisareallysupplementtoourEnglishclassanditiswelcomebystudentstheirparentsandteachers.Theyallthinkitishelpful.IfyouwanttoknowmuchaboutthecorneryoumaytalktothestudentsherE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MyfriendLiMingusedtobeingupsetaboutsomesmallthingsandcouldn’tkeepcalmly.Hisclassmatesweretiredofhimandignoredhim.Teacherswereconcernedabouthimandoftentalkedabouthimfacetofacethereforealltheeffortswereinvain.OnedayatduskhesuffersfromastomachachE.Theteachersandstudentssenthimtohospitalwithoutdelayandtookwellcareofhim.Afterherecoveredhewasgratitudetotheteachersandclassmates.Fromthenonhenolongerdisturbswithhisclassmatesandoftenjoinstheminsettlingsomeproblems.Heisgettingalongwellwithhisclassmatesandbecomescaringstudent.AsfarasI’mconcernedit’stheloveandcarefromtheteachersandhisclassmateswhohaschangedhimentirely.

作文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏子符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词Itisinterestedtovisitanothercountrybutsometimesthereareanyproblemswhenwedon’tknowaboutthelanguageverygood.Itmaybedifficulttotalkaboutthepeoplethere.Wemaynotknowhowtousethetelephoneinthecountrywherewearevisiting.Wemaynotknowwhattobuythethingsweneed.Inastrangecountrywemaynotknowwheretoeatandwhattoorderinarestaurant.Itisnoteasytodecidehowmanymoneytotipwaitersortaxidrivers.Whenwearehelplesswemaynotknowhowtoaskhelp.Afterashorttimelaterhoweverwelearnwhattodoandwhattosay.Welearntoenjoylifeinanothercountryandthenwemaybesorryleaveboththeplaceandthepeople.2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Whenarabbitseessomethingdangeritrunsaway.Itstailmovesupanddownasitruns.Theotherrabbitseethistailmovedupanddown.Theyknowthatthereisdangerandtheyruntoo.ManyotheranimalsusethiskindlanguagE.WhenabeehasfoundsomefooditgobacktoitshomE.Itcantellotherbeeswherethefoodiswithspeakingtothembutitdoesalittledanceintheair.Thistellsthebeesathometherethefoodis.Someanimalssaythingsbymakesounds.A.dogbarkswhenastrangergoesnear.A.catpurrswhenpleaseD.

下面是你同学的一篇英文习作请你帮助修改这篇作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改仅限一次2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearSirorMadameI’mverygladtobeinvitedtoanEnglishsummercamp.IprefertogoinginJulybecauseI’llhavetoprepareourselvesforthenewschoolterminAugust.Itseemedthatalltheactivitiesyouofferareattractandmeaningful.ButafterhaveadiscussionwithmyparentsI’vedecidedtoattendtheEnglishlecturesfromthemIcangetmoreinformationonBritishandAmericanculturE.Asalargegroupinternationalpeopleworkinglivingortravelinginourcountrycommunicationbecomesveryimportant.IhopetoteachforeignerChineseandspreadChineseculturE.Thankyouverymuch.

短文中共有10处语言错误每句话最多两处错误错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在此处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出增加的词;删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉;修改在错的词下划一横线并在其下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从十一处起不计分Everyonehasadream.Weareonthewaytoachieveitwhetherthewayissmoothortoughly.Assenior3studentIhavethesamedreamasmyclassmatesthatIcanbeadmittedtoanidealuniversity.InthepastthreeyearsIhavedoneeverythingIcantoequipmyselfwiththatIhavelearntfrommyteachers.NotonlyhaveIenjoyedthepleasureofstudybutalsoIhavegotclosertomydream.Anxiousandpressurediddiscouragefrommeattimes.BesideswiththeencouragementofmyteachersandclassmatesIthinkI’llmakeit.I’msurethattherehasstillalongwaytogotoachievemydream.NomatterhowchallengeditisI’llmakeitcometruE.AstheproverbsaidWherethere’sawillthere’saway.

作文中共有10处语言错误每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏子符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MissJoneswasmathteacher.Herhomewasnotfarfromherschoolbutshealwayswalkedthereinthemorning.Allthepupilsintheschoolwasveryyoung.InacoldandwindymorningMissJoneswalkedtotheschoolandthecoldwindgoesintohereyesandbigtearbegantorunout.Shereachedschoolopenedthedoorandgoingintotheclassroom.ItwasniceandwarmhereandMissJoneswashappilybutthenasmallboylookedatherforafewsecondstoputhisarmsaroundherandsaidkinD.Don'tcryMissJones.Schoolisn'tverybaD.

假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ItwasnotuntilIwas30yearsoldwhenIdecidedIwantedtoteach.Iwanttomakedifferenceinthelivesofsmallchildren.NothavingspentevenonedaylearninacollegeclassroomIamnowattendingfull-timeandIloveit.AndIfeelsimplehappy.AftergraduationIhopedIcanteachinaprimaryschooltohelpingstudentslearnmoreandmoreknowledges.IwillmakegooduseupmytimeandlearnasmanyasIcan.I’msurethatmyeffortwillpayitoffandmydreamcancometrueoneday.

IusedtofeelIwasthesuninmyfamily.Butwhenmycousinwasborneveryonepaysmoreattentiontoher.SoIdislikedherandcouldn'tgetalongwellwithher.AstimewentonIrealizedwhatridiculousIhadbeenatthattimE.ItriedtofindapropertimetoapologizE.Whenmycousin'sfamilycametomyhomeafewdayagoItookmycousintoplayoutsidE.InthewaytotheplaygroundIboughtmuchsnacksforher.Thenwebeganchat.WhenwetalkedabouttheirchildhoodsuddenlyIsaid‘sorry’gently.ShewassilentlysoIthoughtthatshehadn'theardofmeclearly.Butafterwhileshesaid:Don'tsaythat.Inmymemoryyouarealwaysfriendly.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Iwenttoseeafilmaftersupper.OnmywaythecinemaImetanoldEnglishwomanshehadlostherway.Igaveupthechancetoseethefilmwalkingtowardsherandtookhertoherhotel.WhilegothereItoldhergreatchangehadtookplaceinthepastfewyearsandshetoldmesomethingaboutBritainandherfamily.ThoughImissedthefilmbutIfeltveryhappyforInotonlyhelpedtheoldladyoutfromtroublealsopractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadn’tworkedhardatEnglishIwouldnothavebeenunabletohelpher.

WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteinEnglishIranintomuchdifficulties.ThemainproblemwasthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedheradviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwroteastoryandshowedtomyteacher.Helikedthemverymuchandreadsittotheclass.AllsaidthatthestorywasagoodonE.TheirwordwereagreatencouragementtomE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Haveyouevernoticedhowmuchanumbertwelveisused?Arulerisafootlonghastwelveinches.Onacalendar日历youcanseetwelvemonthsineachyear.A.clockfaceisnumberedfromonetotwelveforthehour.Eachdayistwotimesoftwelveortwenty-fourhourslong.Webuyeggsbydozen.Inastoreyoumayhaveseenadozenpencilsholdtogetherbyapaperwrappingoradozenorangesinapaperbag.Storesalsosellthingswithlotsoftwelvedozensorbythegross.Onegrossismadeoftwelvedozensandonehundredandforty-fourpieces.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改答题要求增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分OnmywaytoschoolthismorningIsawsomethingshinebytheroadsidE.IwalkedtoitandfoundthatitwasthegoldnecklacE.IpickeditupbutlookedarounD.NooneseemedtolookingforthelostnecklacE.ClasswouldbegininafewminutesoIhadnotimetodealwithit.Idecidedtotakingitwithmetoschool.ThemomentwhenclasswasoverIhandeditintotheheadteacherandhethoughthighlyofmyself.WhenschoolisoverIheardourschoolradiostationbroadcasttheschoolnewsthatpraisedmefordoingsoagoodthing.Myparentswerealsohappyaboutit.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearXiaoMingIamaeditorofEnglishCorner.I'vereceivedyourletteraskmetogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Herearesomeofmysuggestions:FirstofallIsuggestyoushouldreadtheEnglishwordsentencesandshortarticlesloudeverymorning.Meanwhileyoushouldtrytomemorizetheusefulsentencesasmuchaspossibleandrecitesomeshortpassagesaswell.Moreoveritsuggestedthatyoureadagreatvarietyofbooksafterschool.Lastbutnotleastacertainamountoftimeshouldbespentinlisteningexercises.AslongasyoucanmakegooduseofyoursparedtimetolearnEnglishsurelyyouwillmakerapidprogress.JustasthesayinggoingWherethereisawillandthereisaway.IfyousticktoyourdreamandstudyhardlyI'msureyouwillbesuccessfulinyourEnglishstudy.YoursLiHua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Berthawasaveryprettygirl.Quitealotyoungmenwantedtomarrywithherbutshewasnotsatisfiedwithanyofthem.OnedayoneoftheyoungmancametovisitherandaskedhertobecomehiswifE.SheansweredNoJohnIdon'tmarryyou.IwanttomarryamanwhoisfamouswhocanplaymusicinstrumentandcansinganddanceverygoodwhocantellinterestedstorieswhodoesnotsmokeordrinkwhostayathomeintheeveningswhostopstalkingwhenI'mtiredoflistening.TheyoungmangotuptookhiscoatandwenttothedoorhoweverbeforeheleftthehouseheturnedandsaidtoBerthaItisn'tamanyou'relookingfor.It'satelevisionset.

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分NearlyfiveyearsbeforeandwiththehelpbyourfathermysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes圣女果inourbackgardenSincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.AsresulttheplantsaregrowingsomewherE.ThefruitsaresmallinsizebutjuicyandtastE.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryearbutwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatoncost!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号/\并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词不按要求方式改的不给分！2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分XieLeitoldmethatshefeelsmuchmoreathomeinEnglandnowandthathadseemedverystrangeagonowappearsquitenormal.I’vejustgotonemorethingachievE.IhavebeenveryoccupiedtoworkthatIhaven’thadtimeforsocialactivities.Ithinkit’simportanttohaveabalanceinstudyandasociallifesoI’mgoingtojoininafewclubs.HopefulI’llmakesomenewfriends.WewillfollowXieLei’sprogressesinlatereditionsofthisnewspaperbutfornowwewishXieLeiallthebestinhisnewenterprisE.ShedeservestosucceeD.

下面短文中有10处语言错误请在有错误的地方增加删除或修改某个单词增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该横线下写上修改后的词注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Atherfriend’sJaneenjoyedadetectivefilmthatayounggirlwasfollowedandmurdereD.ThenshewalkedalonetothebusstopfeltalittlefrighteneD.Shebecamemorefrightenedwhenshefoundamanonthebusstaringher.AftershegotoffthebusshefoundherstillfolloweD.FrightenedandangrilyshewalkedasquicklyaspossiblE.OnthewayhomeshecouldstillhearoffootstepsbehindhersoshedarednotturnarounD.ShewasfeelingforherkeyatthefrontdoorwhileshefeltahandonhershouldersandheardanicevoiceI’myournewneighbor.IthoughtIknowyouonthebusbutIwasn’tsosurE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分WhilevisitFrancewedecidetodosomeshopping.Notfarfromthehoteltherewasashopwithallkindofclothinghangingup.Whenwewentintotheshopawomancameupandaskedthatshecouldhelpusbutwesaidthatwewouldlikelookaroundonourown.HelookedatusratherstrangE.Nothavingfoundanythingweneededwethankedthewomanandwereleft.SuddenlymyhusbandstartedtolaughpointingtoasmallsignwithEnglishwhichreadsDRY-CLEANINGSHOP.Ifyouareasmokerpleasedon’tsmokeherE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Whatcouldbemorerefreshingthandrinkacanoficycoldsodaafterexercising?ItisknownSodaisapopulardrinkallovertheworlD.Butdrinkingtoomanyofitcanhaveserioushealthconsequences.Foraninstanceweightgainisastronglypossibilityasaresultofthehighsugarandcalories.Drinkingsodahasalsobeenlinkedtotoothdecay蛀牙.Infacttheacidinsodacanbegindamagingteethjust20minuteaftersodaisdrunkaccordingtoasurvey.UnfortunatelysalesofsodaisgoingdownintheUSasthesurveyshows.That’sprobablywhynowadayspeoplearemoreawarethissweetdrink’shealthrisks.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在此处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出修改的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在其下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从11处起不计分IjustreturnedbackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentsfromdifferentcountrytovisittheUKfromFeB.16to28.WepaidavisittoagoodmanyplaceslikeLondonOxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondonwherewasmyfavoritE.IalsolikedOxfordinwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautifulbutitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheyweretherE.ThemostexcitedthingformeinBritainwasthatImakealotoffriendstherE.YoursLiMing

文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号/\并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者丛第11处起不计分Iwasnotgoodinmathinthefirstyearofjuniorhighschool.HavingbeenfailedsomanytimesinmathexamsIwasanxiousaboutthesubject.EverytimeItriedhardlytoworkoutamathproblemIwasafraidofmakingmistakesthatreallymademefeelhelpless.LuckilyImetanicemathteacherinsecondyear.ShetoldmethatIdidn’tneedtoworryaboutmakingmistakesbecauseIcouldfindoutmyshortcomingsthroughmymistakE.ShealwaysencouragedmyselftotryagainwheneverImakeamistakE.Thankstomyteacher’sencouragementIbecameinterestinginmathandmaderapidprogress.Myexperienceprovesthatfailurewasthemotherofsuccessandthatwecanlearnalotfromour

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分OnedayIwokeupandsmelledfirE.IgotbackandranoutoftheapartmentimmediatE.OutsideIseeawomaninthesecond-floorwindowholdingoutanewbornbaby.Heaskedmetocatch.WithoutthesecondthoughtIrushedoverandheldoutmyarms.AfterIknewitthebabyhadlandedinmyarms.IwassomuchhappythatitwasfinE.Themotherhadtojumpoutofthewindoweither.Latershethankedmeforsaveherbaby.Itfeltgreatlytobeagoodneighbor.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearMr.GreenI'mveryexcitingtolearnthatyouwillstartamagazinetogether.ThatsoundsgreatandIdefinitelyagreeyouonthat.SomeofthecolumnsthatyoumentionintheletterarereallymycupofteA.CulturalExpressgiveusabetterunderstandingoftheworlD.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartoftheworldhavedifferentvaluesit'snecessarytolearnfromeachanother.ApartfromthatBlurtOutisprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimprovingoralEnglish.Entertainmentisalsocool!Thepopularsingersactorsorcelebritiesaresoattractivelythatyouabsolutelycan'tmissthispart.Teenagersaretofondofpopularthingstoo.WellIcan'tlistmorE.Ireallycan'twaittoreadthismagazinE.YoursLiMing

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分TherewillbeaspeechonourschoolplaygroundthisSaturdayafternoonwhichthemeisTocivilizeschoolyardismyresponsibility.AlltheteachersandstudentsrequiredtoattenD.Intheactivitythefirsttwowinnerineachgradewillgivesuchvaluableadviceasfollows:weshouldnotlittersomewhereinordertokeepourcampusclean;weshouldloveflowersgrassandtreessuchthateveryonecanenjoythegreenness;weshouldbehavewellinsteadofrunafteroneanotherquarrelingandfightingnoisy;weshouldcarefortheotherssothatourschoolwillbefullwithlovE.Webelieveyourschoolwillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulandpeaceful.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分NowadaysmoreandmorepeoplearechoosingtoshopontheInternetonthattheycanbuyalotofproducts.Fortheexampleyoucanbuyphysicallyproductslikebooksandclothes.YoucanalsorelytheInternettocommunicatewithothers.GenerallyshoppingonlinehavethefollowingadvantagE.Firstitismoreconvenient.Youcanshopatanytimeanditiseasytofindthatyouarelookingfor.SofarmostpeoplehavebeenusedtobuygoodsontheInternet.SeconditwasoftencheapertobuygoodsontheInternet.ThereforesomepeopleholddifferentideassayingtheymaybuysomefakeproductsonlinE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多着从第11处起不计分Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.MymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworldsoIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.AtapartymycoachwithabiscuitinhismouthaskedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjokedImighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分FriendshipisimportancE.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallourliveswecan’tlivewithoutfriendshipjustlikewecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesusgettingonwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesinfrontofus.Butrealfriendshipiseasytocomebytruefriendshipmustbesincerelyandbebasedonunderstandeachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.A.goodfriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadvicewearepersuadingtogotherightway.Thereforemorefriendswehavethebetterwecanimproveourselves.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分NowadaysmanysingersandbandshavelittletodowithgoodmusiC.Theyknowlittleaboutwhatgoodmusicmean.Whatisthecause?Sofarmostofthesesingershaveseemusicasajobbecauseitisagoodsourceofmakingmoney.AndifyouhavegoodappearanceandsomeexpensiveclothestoshowoffatyourconcertsthenyouvoiceisnotsoimportantasitshouldbE.Thepublicwillprefertoadmiremoreaboutthemostinterestedpartsofyourbodyandevenforgotthatyouaretheretoshowyourmusicskillsnotyourdancingwhichisimportanttoobutnotatsuchahighlevel.Howevertheyounggenerationshouldbeunderstandtalentandagoodvoicemattermoreintheirmusicalcareer.AlltheperformanceswhichhavelittletodowithgoodmusicfailinbewelcomedonstagE.Ifayoungmanhasagreatvoiceandwantstobecomeasuccessfullysingerheshouldtakesomespecialcoursesinthisareabecausetheywillhelphimimprovesingingabilities.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Ilovecamping.It'smyfavoritewaytospentthesummervacation.MyfamilyandIwentcampinthecountrysideinlastyear.ItwasoneofthemostexcitingexperiencesIhadneverhaD.Everydaywesleepinatentandwentforlongwalk.Wecookedoverafireandthefoodalwaystastedwonderfully.ForawholeweekIsawlovelymountainsviewsandbreathedfreshair.AtnightIheardthegentlewindblowinginthetreesandIfeltsopeaceful.Itdidn’tcostmuchtocampandIbelieveit'sthebestwaytogetclosetonatureandenjoyitbeauty.

假定英语课上老师要求用桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号/\并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Thismorningataboutnineo’clockIwasonmywaythesupermarket.SuddenlyIseeheavysmokerisingaboutseveralhundredsmetersaway.Theremustbeafire!Ithought.GettingnearerIsawashopwasonfirE.TherewasmanypeoplestandingbytheroadsidewatcheD.SixfirefighterswerestrugglingtoputoutthefirE.Iheardsomeonesaytheyhadfoughtforaboutanhourandtwofirefightershadrushedintotheshoptorescueawoman.Afterawhiletheyrushedoutsupportthewoman.Butonefirefightergotinjuredserious.AllthepeopleandIwhomsawwhathappenedweredeeplymovedbytheirbravery.Abouttwentyminuteslatethefirewasfinallyputout.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同学写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Todaywehadachemistrytest.IfoundthetestdifficultybutItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMarymybestfriendaskingmetolethertocopymyanswers.AfterthinkforsometimeIlethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetestallofuswerecalledtotheteacher'sofficE.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn'tcheat.IwasjusthelpingafrienD.Whydoesshepunishme?

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的文章.文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改.ThenewswhichtheEnglishEntranceExaminationwillbereformedhascausedabigearthquakeinourcountry.Manypeopleincludedstudentsareforit.Buttherearealsosomepeopleareagainstit.Thenisitbettertodosoornot?PersonallyIthinkthereformhasbetweenadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ontheonehanditcanreducestudents’learnburdenandenableEnglishtoreturnbacktoitstruefunction.OntheotherhanditwillcausestudentstospendlesstimeonstudyingEnglishandtoattachedlessimportancetoEnglish.IfsostudentswillnothaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish.What’smoreifstudentsdon’thavesoagoodabilitytheywillnotbeabletobroadenourhorizonandmeetthefuturechallenges.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删减或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符∧并在其下面写出该加的词删词把多余的词用﹨划掉修改在错的词下面画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从11处起不计分MycousinLiMingisaseniorthreestudentwhichdevoteshimselftohislessonseveryday.LastSaturdayasusuallyhewenttoseveralclasses.Intheeveninghecontinuedtostudyathomeuntildeeplyintothenight.Hewastoosleepyandtiredthathecouldn’tworkeffectively.OnSundaymorninghewasabouttodohislessonswhilehisfathercameupandadvisedhimtotakeabreak.SoontheycameupagoodideA.TheydecidedtogotocyclinginthecountrysidE.LiMingenjoyedhimselfcompetingandchattingwithhisfatherandfeltrelaxingintheopenair.OnMondayLiMingwasenergeticbutactiveinclass.ThoughhespentawholedayinthecountryhethoughtthathehaddonewasworthwhilE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在其下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分BeingresponsibleisnotsodifficultasweimaginE.Iusedtothinkitishardtogrowupintoaresponsiblememberofoursociety.AnincidenthappeninginarainySundayafternoonchangedmyattitudE.Iwasonmywaytoabookstoreandwaswaitingforthegreenlightwhileagirlwasknockeddownbypassingcarwhichdroveoffquickly.A.manimmediatelygaveherfirstaidandIhadjoinedinwithouthesitation.Soonmanyhelpwasgiventothegirl.Becausewesenthertothenearesthospitalsintimeshewasabletoreceiveproperlytreatment.NotbadlyinjuredIexpressedgratitudetothosegivinghelp.ComparedwiththeescapingdriverIwasproudofwhatIdiD.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改同桌写的一下作文文中共有10处寓言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删减把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错词下面划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Overtimecomputerhasbeenchangedquitethelot.Afteritwasprogrammedbyanoperatorwhichusedcardswithholesitcouldthinklogicalandproduceananswerquickerthananyperson.Astimegobycomputerwasmadesmaller.WithitmemoryimprovedasaresultofittotallychangedinshapE.Overtimecomputer’smemoryhasdevelopedsomuchwhichlikeanelephantitneverforgetssomething.Intheearly1960scomputerwasabletoshareknowledgewithothers.Since1970smanynewapplicationhavebeenfoundforit.ForexampleithasevenbeensentexploretheMoonandMars.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分I.’mhonouredthatyouwouldaskmeforadvices.Asyouknowourbandisformedinaveryunusualway.However.wehavelearnedalotofthebandsincethen.Firstyouwillneedtoagreeonwhatkindofmusicyouwanttowriteandplay.Youhadbettertoplayonekindofmusicifyouwanttobecomefamous.Nextyouwillneedtocomewithanameforyourband—somethingwhichisdifferent.Thenmakeaspeciallytimeforpracticeandstickonit.Youwillalsowanttogiveseveralperformancesforfriendsandfamiliestogettheirideasontheirmusicalability.Abovealljusthavefunny!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线/划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Iwasusedtofeelsleepyinclassandcouldn’tfocusonthelessonstheteachersgivE.AsaresultnotonlydidIdobadinmystudiesbutalsomyhealthwentfrombadtoworseaboutwhichIwasoftenscoldedbymyparents.Iwasalsoannoyingaboutmysituation.Abouthalfayearagofollowedtheheadteacher’sadviceIbegantoparticipateinsomesportactivitiesandkeptonplayingbasketballfor45minutesandsoeverydaytilltoday.NowmyhealthhasbeengreatlyimprovedsoatthesametimeI’vemadegoodprogressinallmylessons.Physicalexercisehaschangedmeintoanentirenewperson!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分AllofusknowtheoldsayingPracticemakeperfect.Ittellsusunlesswewanttorealizeouraimweshouldpractiseandonedaywewillmakeit.It’seasytounderstanD.OnceIwantedtolearnswimming.AtfirstIfounddifficulttocontrolmybody.Ijustsinkintothewater.Ifeltveryfrightening.ThenIwatchedotherswhoweregoodatthemandaskedthemthekeytosucceeD.IwenttotheswimmingpooleverydaylearnedfromthemandpractiseD.A.daywhenmyfriendpushedmeintotheswimmingpoolIsuddenfoundthatIcouldswim.HowexcitedIwas!NowIcanswimmuchmorebetterthanbeforE.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分OnedayIwokeupandsmelledfirE.IgotbackandranoutoftheapartmentimmediatE.OutsideIseeawomaninthesecond-floorwindowholdingoutanewbornbaby.Heaskedmetocatch.WithoutthesecondthoughtIrushedoverandheldoutmyarms.AfterIknewitthebabyhadlandedinmyarms.IwassomuchhappythatitwasfinE.Themotherhadtojumpoutofthewindoweither.Latershethankedmeforsaveherbaby.Itfeltgreatlytobeagoodneighbor.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线╲划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分HereisaintroductiontoBeechSchoolofEnglish.ComparingwiththeotherschoolsIwillthinkitisthebestonethatyoucangoto.Firstitisveryconvenientofyoutogettherebytrain.Secondtheschoolissmallandtheclassesareverysmalleither.Thereare24teachinghoursaweek.StaywithanEnglishfamilywillprovideyouwithachancetopractiseyourspeakingEnglishandknowmoreabouttheEnglishfamilylifE.Afterclassyoucanenjoysportsandotheractivitywithyourclassmates.Thepriceisreasonably.Iwillgetintouchwiththemyouareinterestedinit.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Athieffoundaricholdmanwholivesatthebottomofthemountains.Oneeveningherbrokeintoherhouseandstartedtogatherthevaluableitems.Thewholeroomwasenveloped笼罩insilent.AllofsuddenheheardsomeonesayJackiswatchingyou!Hedidn’tseesomeoneinthedarkhousebuthewentonwithwhathewasdoing.A.littlewhilelaterhehearditagainandthenhewasfrighteningbutreallywonderedwhowassayingthat.Heturnedontheflashlightlookedaroundtheroomandfinalsawaparrot.Didyousaythat?askedfortheman.Yesrepliedtheparrots.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThefamouspersonIwouldreallyliketointerviewhimisYangLiwei.HeisnotonlythefirstChinesetogoingtospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautintheworlD.IhavelonginterestedinspaceexplorationandIbelieveIcouldlearnagreatdealbyhimaboutit.IfIcouldinterviewhimIwillaskhimwhatmadehimanastronautandhowhewastraining.I’dalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissogreatfunasIhavereaD.FinallyIwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallylifethatmustbeveryinteresting.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThisafternoonIwenttoseemygrandfatherbyabus.ItwasverycrowdedandIhadtostand.Besidesmetherewasawomanholdalittleboyinherarms.Infrontofherayoungmanoccupiestwoseatspretendingtobesleeping.IheardthelittleboycuriousaskinghismotherWhat’swrongwiththeuncle?Ihadthoughtifperhapsthewomanwouldblametheman.BeyondherexpectationsthewomanansweredwithasmileBequiet.Thisunclemustverytiredbecauseofhardwork.Theyoungmanmusthaveheardtheword.Hisfaceturnedredbutofferedoneseattothewomanatonce.

DearBobHello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher1.______MissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriendandgettoknow2.______moreaboutyourcountry.Firstletmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself3.______MynameisLiHuA.IliveinBeijingwhereisthe4.______capitalofChinA.IgotoHongqiMiddleSchool.5.______WestudyquiteafewsubjectsuchasmathsChinese6.______Englishandphysics.Iusetoplayping-pongalot7.______inmysparetimebutnowIaminterestingin8.______football.Doyouplayanyballgames?Whatyourfavourite9.______sport?Ilookforwardtohearfromyousoon.10.______YoursLiHua

文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Peopleusedtocommunicatewitheachotherthroughlettersandpublicphones.SonowadaystheyusemobilephonesandtheInternetinsteadof.ThischangeincommunicationhavegoodeffectsonourworksandlifE.ComparingwithlettersandpublicphonesmobilephonesandInternetarefastandmuchmoreconvenient.Ifyoumissedyourgrandmotheryoujusttakeoutyourphoneandsayhellotohim.AndshewillbehappytohearyourvoicE.Ifyouwanttoplaceorderwithaforeigncompanyyoucane-mailthemessagE.It’llbeminutesafteryougettheirreply.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearMrs.WinthopSomyfirstweekatcollegeisover!NolecturesthismorningsoIthinkI'demailyouandletyouknowwhatthingsaregoing.I'mgladtosaythatanythinghasworkedoutfineinthedorm.Irememberaskingforaroomasfarawayfromtheliftsaspossibleandtheyfindmeacomfortableoneonsecondfloor.TherearetwogirlsfrommycoursehereandIplantomakefriendwiththemsothatwecanhelpeachotheronthecoursework.EveryoneelseseemsveryniceandwarmlyherE.WellIhadbettertostopnow.I'mgoingtoattendminefirstlessonthisafternoonforI'vegotsomepreparationtomakE.Keepintouch.BestCarol

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThankyouforsendingtometheScheduleforSummerEnglishCourses.AsformechoiceI’dpreferasix-weekcoursefor75hoursofstudythesewouldallowmetohavemoretimetoseeourbeautifulcountrywhilelearningEnglish.Iwouldliketodoanytravelingandtrytomakefewnewfriends.AboveallIcanaffordthetuition.IhadbeenlearningEnglishfor6yearsandIcanlistenspeakreadorwriteinEnglish.IhopetoimprovemyspeakingEnglishasmanyaspossiblE.IwanttoknowbetteraboutEnglishcustom.IbelieveIwillhaveawonderfultimE.

IwasanxiouslyexpectedyourletterandatlastithasbeenreachedmE.Iamverygladtoknowthateveryoneathomeisenjoyinggoodhealthasusually.ThingsherearethesamenowaswewerebeforE.Thefinalexaminationwilltakeplaceofnextweek.ButIamnowbusypreparingmylessons.It’snicetothinkthatthesummervacationiscomingnearlyIcan’tsaymuchIwanttoseeyouallagain.Lookingforwardtospendsummerdayswithyou.GivemylovetoFathermotherandanyoneathomE.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾√如有错误每行只有一个错误则按下列情况改正该行多一个词把多余的词用斜线\划掉在该行右边横线上写出该词也用斜线划掉该行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧在该行右边横线上写出该加的词该行错一个词在错的词下划一横线在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意原行没有错的不要改IthinkIamapersonwhocangetonwellwithanolD.SoIwouldliketohaveachancetovisittoOldPeople’sHomeasavolunteer.Icanhelpthembydosomecleaningandotherkindofhousework.Iwouldliketotalkaboutthem.IcansingsongsanddanceforthemandIcanalsoreadbooksandmagazinesforthem.Iwouldalsoliketohelpillchildreninthehospital.Icantalktheminterestingstoriesandplaygameswiththem.InawordIwouldliketohelppeopleneedhelp.I’msureIamakindorusefulperson.

1.It_______________想到tometovisitmyteacher.2.Iftheexercisecauses___________不适stopimmediately.3.Iacceptedthejobwithout_____________犹豫.4.Taking_____________责任forsomethingthatwentwrongisamarkofgreatmaturity.5.AswejoinedthebigcrowdIgot_________________分离frommyfriends6.Shedoesn’t____________________________勉强接受将就anythingbutthebest.7.A.negativeattitudewill______________________________使你一事无成.8.__________________________________记着somepeoplemayneedyourhelp.9.Since1949theseparksandbuildingshavebeen_________________________________对大众开放.10.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwe_________________________________创造和谐的氛围.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误每句最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分.Mr.Smithsoldahousenearaschool.HespentthefirstweekthereinpeacE.Thencomesanewschoolyear.EveryafternoonafterschoolseveralboyscametoplaythefootballbehindhishousE.TheymadetoomuchnoisethatMr.Smithcouldn’tstandit.Hedecidedtakesomesteps.Oneafternoonhestoppedtheboysandgavethemselveseachadollar.Hesaidtheybroughthimalotoffuns.Healsopromisedtogivethemmoneyeverydayunlesstheyplayedfootballtherethatmadethechildrenveryhappy.A.weeklaterMr.Smithtoldthemhehadnomoney.Theboysbecameangrybutdidn’tplayfootballthereanymorE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼画掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分SomeoldpeoplearenottakengoodcarE.Theirchildrendon'tvisitthemselvesregularly.Theydon'thaveproperfoodormedicinewhentheyareill.Thereasonsforthisareclearly.Foronethingmanyyoungpeoplearesobusytolookaftertheiroldparents.Foranothersomeyoungpeoplethinkitheavyburdentospendalotofmoneyontheirparents.ItistheChinesetraditionrespecttheoldandprotecttheyoung.Theoldpeopledeserveourattentionandlovebecausetheyhavemadegreatcontributiontooursociety.Ifthatwedon'ttreattheoldproperlytodaywewillbebadlytreatedwhenwegotolD.Let'stakeactionfromnowon.Let'sshowconcerntotheoldaroundus.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号Λ并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Asseniorthreestudentitwon’ttakelongafterIgraduatE.NowIhavemuchtosharewithmyfellowstudent.FirstlyI’dliketoshowmyappreciationtothosestandbymeallthewayteachersparentsandfriendsincludeD.Withouttheirhelpandadvicemylifewillbedifferent.Secondlyit’shightimethatIsaidsorrytotheclassmatesIhavehurtandmisunderstanD.Ifirmbelievethatcommunicationandsmilesactasbridgestofriendship.AboveallI’vemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudysohardworkisthekeytosuccess.JustastheoldsayinggoNopainsNogains.FinallyIwanttoexpressmyhopewhichalltheyoungfellowscanmakefulluseoftimebecausetimeandtidewaitfornoman.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分WhenIwasachildIspentmorethantenyearslearntheviolin.ThereforeIcouldn'tunderstandrealmusic.AfterIgraduatedathighschoolafriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweallthoughtitwascool.lwillneverforgetthedayonthatwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstore.ThereIsawaguitarplayerplayingtheguitarwhichIreallyenjoyeD.Hebecamemythefirstguitarteacher.Ittookmesuchalongtimechooseaguitaramongseveralwonderfulmodel.NowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Foodismuchimportanttoourhealth.Everyoneneedtoeatwellifheorshewantstohaveastrongbody.OurmindslikebodiesalwaysneedthebestfooD.ThiskindoffoodisaknowledgE.Whenwewillgetolderweshouldenjoyreadingandlearningaboutallkindsofthings.Ifwejustreceiveanswerswithoutthinkingaboutitwe'llneverlearnwell.Whenwestudyontherightwayandgetknowledgeonourownweenjoylearningwealsolearnmuchandunderstandbetter.

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DearMsSmithIamsecretaryoftheCityStudentUnionCSU.Wewereorganizinganartexhibitionforhighschoolstudentsincity.Thiswillbeheldonthe9thofJulyintheExhibitionHallofBeihai.Morethan1000paintingwillbeonshowbuthighschoolstudentsandteachersfromalltheeightdistrictswillcometotheevent.AsyouareverypopularlywithusChinesehighschoolstudentswe’dliketoinviteForyoutotheexhibition.Wewouldbegratefulwhenyoucouldjointhemthatday.Lookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.TomandDickarenextdoorfriendwhobothworkinsameofficesotheyoftenwalktogethertoandfromofficE.Onedaytheywerewalkingtohometogetherwhileitsuddenlystartedtorain.TomquicklyopenhisumbrellaandsaidproudMywifehadgreatforesight.ShesaidthismorningitwouldrainandtoldmetocarrymyumbrellawithmE.DicksmiledandwalkedcloselytohimundertheprotectionofTom’sumbrellasaidMywifehadevergreaterforesight.Shedidn’tletmecarrymyumbrellaasheknewyouwouldhaveyourswithyou.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MyfriendHenrywithhimIstudiedinthesameclassdidn’tlikestudyingatschool.That’sbecausehecouldn’tgotohighschool.Hehadtoreturnbacktohishometownwherehisfatherwishedhimtolearntomanageoursmallshop.Howevertheyoungmanwasnotinterestinginitanddidn’tdoashisfathersaiD.Hespendsalotoftimereadingandhealsolearnedhowtorepaircars.LastmonthIacceptedane-mailfromhiminvitingmetakemyvacationinhishometown.Istartedoff.SeeingthathewassuchsuccessfulIsaidHenryallroadleadtoRomE.Youaregreat!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改:在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Havingadreamisofgreatimportance.Yourdreamsareordinaryandrealistic.IhopeIwilladmittedintoatopuniversityandbecomeagooddoctorafterIwillgraduatefromuniversity.IhopedonedayIcanfindacureforcancer.IhopethosewhomlovemeandthosewhomIlovewillbehealthyandlivehappyeveryday.TorealizemydreamsIwilltakemoreexercisestobuildupmybody.Iwilltrymybesttofocustimeandenergytomystudy.Imustworkhardatmylessonsorbefullypreparingfortheentranceexam.

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DearEditorI’mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.Waterisimportant.Weaswellasanimalcannotlivewithoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycangowithoutit.Yetitseemedthatwaterisbecominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.TodealwithaproblemIthinkweshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Nextnotdrinkingwatershouldbeleftrunning.Thirdweshouldfindwaystoreusethewaterusinginwashingespeciallybathwaterforwhichisquitealotandthatwillsavemuchwater.SincerelyLiHua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Forestsareveryimportant.Withoutitwewillhavenottrees.AndtreesgiveuswooD.Withwoodpeoplecanmakemanythings.PeopleneedthesethingssothattheycanlivegooD.Ifwehavenotreeswecan'tbuildhousE.Almosteverythinginourhomesismadeofwoods.Whenthereisgreentreesarounduswehavefreshair.Itisgoodtohealth.Forestscansavesoilsoeveryoneshouldtakegoodcareforforestsinorderthathavelargeandbettertrees.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.SomepeoplelikedtobuygoodsonlinE.AndIdon’tlikeitbecauseonlineshoppingismorereliablethanthetraditionalsalE.FirstlysomedishonestmerchantoffercustomerstofalseinformationonlinE.Secondlyconsumerscan’tfeeltheitemsthatisusuallypresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromwhichconsumersexpect.AsaresulttheymayriskreturningtheitemsattheirownexpensE.Thirdlytheitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.Inwordonlineshoppingisn’treliableatall.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Oncetherelivedamanwhowassuchlazythatnojobwasfithim.Inordertomakealivinghewenttotheneighbourofhisforhelponeday.Theneighbouradvisedtohimtobeacemeterycaretaker守墓人asitwastheeasiestjobonecouldfinD.Thelazymandelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Andtoeverybody'ssurprisehegaveuphisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.It'sunfair.hesaidtotheneighbourangry.InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhenIamtheonlyonewhohastostanD.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分JackLondonwasafamousAmericawriter.HewasborninJanuary12th1876inSanFrancisco.HisfamilywasverypoorsoJackhadtoleaveforschooltomakemoney.Heworkedhardinmuchdifficultjobs.LaterJackreturnedschoolbuthedidn'tstay.HewroteLifeandpocketbookwerealltooshort.In1887hewenttoAlaskatofindoutgolD.HereturnedhomeandstartedtowritE.Hiswritingsweresuccessfullyandhebecamerichandfamous.Jackwasnoahappymanhowever.Inpoorhealthhetookoffherownlifein1926.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分WhenIwasachildIspentmorethantenyearslearntheviolin.ThereforeIcouldn’tunderstandrealmusic.AfterIgraduatedathighschoolafriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweallthoughtitwascool.IwillneverforgetthedayonthatwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstorE.ThereIsawaguitarplayerplayingtheguitarwhichIreallyenjoyeD.Hebecamemythefirstguitarteacher.Ittookmesuchalongtimechooseaguitaramongseveralwonderfulmodel.NowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分AtthemomentyouareworriedaboutyourweightandareundermanypressurE.AsfarasIknowyouarefondinfastfoodandareoverweight.Youwanttoloseweightbygoonadietthatisachallengeforyou.Althoughyouarehungrybutyoupreferstandinghungertobecomefat.Asaresultyoufeelboring.InordertosolvetheproblemIturnedtoaexpertwhowasthefirsttowintheNobelPrizeforMedicinE.Hecomeupwithsomegoodsuggestions.Isupposeyourproblemwillbesolvedandyou’lllivearelaxedlifeagain.Itishealththatmattersmost.ThisisallwhatIwanttosay.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉修改在错的词下划一横线___并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分ThisafternoonIwenttoseemygrandfatherbyabus.ItwasverycrowdedandIhadtostanD.Besidesmetherewasawomanheldalittleboyinherarms.Infrontofherayoungmanoccupiestwoseatspretendingtobesleeping.IheardthelittleboycuriousaskinghismotherWhat’swrongwiththeuncle?Ihadthoughtifperhapsthewomanwouldblametheman.BeyondherexpectationsthewomanansweredwithasmileBequiet.Thisunclemustverytiredbecauseofhardwork.TheyoungmanmusthaveheardtheworD.HisfaceturnedredandofferedoneseatforthewomanatoncE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分IjoinedinaprogramcalltheHappySchoolintheholidays.Itwasgiventosomevolunteersfromtheuniversitiesinourcity.Thereweremanycoursesincludingphotographypaintingbasketballtrainingforustochoosefrom.Thesecourseswereintendedtohelpusleft-behindmiddleschoolstudentinthecountrysideourparentsareworkinginothercitiesmakeuseofourholidays.Thevolunteerstookgoodcareofusshowedthemhowtodoourhomeworkandmakesureofoursafety.Ilearnedalotfromtheinterestedprogram.IwillattendsuchprogramsagainthenextsummerifthereissomE.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者不计分3.请将答案写在答题卡中对应的本题处本题答案写在试卷上无效OnedayIhappenedtofindingachattingroominmyQQtherepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.TomysurprisedIfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanmE.IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpracticemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.WithtimewentbyIfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.

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文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加把缺词处加一个漏符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分RecentlyIhaveheardthatyoufeelstressingasastudentofSeniorOnE.HereissomeadvicesonhowtostudyeffectivE.Firstofalllearnintherelaxingway.ThiswillremoveourpressuremakingstudyaneasyjoB.Anotherwaytokeepupourspiritsistotakepartinsports.Notonlyexercisebuildupthebodybutalsoitprovidesatimeforustorelaxandrefreshourmindhelpingusmemorizethingsfasterandlong.Musictooareanothereffectivemeansofrefreshingandhelpingthemconcentratebetter.Lastbutnotleastweshouldexchangeideaswithourclassmates.Throughthecommunicationwecanfindsupportthatwillencourageustoovercomedifficultiesinourstudy.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分JeremyHampdenhasalargecircleoffriendsandisverypopularatparties.Everybodyadmireshimonhisgreatsenseofhumour---everybodythatisexcepthissix-year-olddaughterJenny.RecentlyoneofJeremy’sclosestfriendaskedhimtomakeaspeechataweddingreception招待会ThisisthesortofthingwhatJeremyloves.HepreparedthespeechcarefulandwenttotheweddingwithJenny.Hehadincludedalargeamountoffunnystoriesinthespeechandofcourseitwasagreatsuccess.AssoonhehadfinishedJennytoldhimshewantedtogohomE.JeremywasalittledisappointingbythisbuthedidashisdaughteraskeD.OnThewayhomeheaskedJennyifshehadenjoyedthespeech.Tohissurprisedshesaidshehadn’t.Jeremyaskedherwhythiswassoandshetellshimthatshedidn’tliketoseemanypeoplelaughingathim!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分IwatchedTVuntil12o’clocksoIcouldn’tgoovermylessons.ThismorningIgotupverylatethatIhadtogotoschoolwithoutabreakfastinahurrybutIwasstilllateforthefirstclass.WhenIentertheclassroomthemathsteacherhadtostopexplaininganimportantproblemandalltheeyeswerefixinguponmE.MyfaceturnedreD.SomethingevenworsewashappenedtomeinEnglishclass.Theteacheraskedmerecitethetext.HoweverIcouldsaynothingandsorryforIdidnotspendsometimepreparingmylessons.Theteacherlookedatmewithhiscoldeyes.IstoodatmybenchwithoutdaringtorisemyheaD.HowaterribledayIhad!Iwillneverdoanythinglikethis.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌的以下作文文中共有10出语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改的词Itiswell-knownthatgoodhabitsdousgoodallourlifE.Enteredhighschool.Itookdelightinhavingfastfoodandofteneattoomuch.IntheendIwassoseriesoverweightthatIsufferedalotfrommyawkwardappearancE.Itmademattersworsewasthefactthatmyclassmatesmadeafunofmeattimes.FromnowonImadeupmymindtoavoidingsnacks.InthemeanwhileItookoffjoggingtoloseweight.InmysurpriseitwasnotlonguntilIdidsucceedincreatingmynewappearancE.OnlythendidIstarttoappreciatetheimportanceofdevelopingagoodhabit.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词作斜线\划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分MybrotherDonalddidn’tdowellinmath.WhenthedayoftheexamcomesDonaldsatnexttoBrianwhichwasalwaysgoodatmath.DonaldcarefulcopiedBrian’sanswers.Atendoftheexamtheteachercollectedthepapersandgradedit.ThenshedecidedtogiveaprizetothestudentwhogotthehighgradE.ButitwasabitofdifficultforhertomakeadecisionbecauseDonaldandBriangotthesamegradE.TheteacherthoughtaboutthatandmadeonhermindtogivetheprizetoBrian.Donaldsaiditwasunfair.That’struetheteachersaiD.ThereforeBrian’sanswertoQuestion18was‘Idon’tknow’.Yourswas‘SodoI’.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下短文短文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在此符号下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Cheetahs猎豹arethefastlandcreaturesintheworlD.Whywouldacheetahneedtobeabletorunningsofastly?Theonlyanimalthatcomesclosetothecheetah’samazedspeedisitsbestfavoritefoodthegazelle瞪羚.Inordertocatchupamealthat’sasswiftasthewindthecheetahhadtodeveloptheability.ItmustrunasfastasorfasterasthegazellE.Otherwiseitwillfacestarvation.Cheetahsareaexcellentexampleoftheeffectsofnaturalselection.Thereisseveralspeciesoflargecatsintheworldbutnoneofthemcanmatchthespeedofthecheetah.

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分TomandDickarenextdoorneighborwhobothworkinthesameofficE.Theyoftenwalkedtogethertoandfromwork.Oncetheywerewalkingtohometogetherwhileitsuddenlystartedtorain.TomquicklyopenedhisumbrellaandsaidproudMywifereallyhasgreatforesight先见之明.ShesaidthismorningwouldrainandtellmetocarrymyumbrellA.DicksmiledandwalkeduptohimundertheprotectionoftheumbrellasaidMinehasevengreatforesight.Shedidn’tletmecarryoneassheknewyou’dshareyourstomE.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Arecentsurveyshowthatmoststudentsoftencommunicatewithourparents.Buttherearestillsomethinkingthatembarrassingtosharetheirideaswiththem.Actuallyeveryoneshouldattachimportancetofamilycommunication.Itcanbestrengthenthebondofthewholefamilyorbridgethegapbetweenchildrenandparents.BesidesshareyourpersonalproblemsandemotionswillgreatlyhelpreducethepressureonyouandbuildupyourconfidencE.AsformyfamilywehadaspecialdinnertogethereverySaturdayeveningoverthateveryonetakesturnstoshareoneproblem.Thenotherstrytosuggestsolutions.InthiswaythewholefamilycanenjoyeverysinglebitoflifE.Ithinkmyfamilywillstickoutthetraditionforever.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分AftershoppingMotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticedMotherlookatanearbytableoccupiedbyanelderlywomanandyoungcouplE.Theyatesilentlyanditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.AsweleftMotherstoppedontheirtablE.Excusemeshesaidputherarmsaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.Youremindmesomanyofmymother.MayIhugyou?Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.AfterweleaveIsaidThatwasveryniceofyouMother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandmA.NeitherdidmesaidMothercheerfully.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处每处仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号^并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分StressisastateofbeingupsetthathappenwhenweareunderpressurE.Westudentshaveallexperiencedstressoverproblemsinourdailylifetestresultsortoomanyhomework.Sincestresscanmakeussickwehavetolearnwhattodealwithit.Whenyouarestressfuldon’tforgetyourhobbies.Ifyouarefondmusicjustturnontheradio.GenerallypeoplethinkTVmayinterferewiththeirchildren’sstudies.HoweverifyouworryaboutthatyourEnglishanddon’tknowwhattodoyoucangethelpfromEnglishTVprograms.Itisalsohelptoshareyourworriestoyourfriends.TheywillsurelygiveyousomeadvicesandhelpyououtoftroublE.Aslongaswetreatstressproperwecanrelaxourselvesandkeepawayfromitsbadeffects.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分DearJinJingYourproblemiscommononeamongmiddleschoolstudents.Maybethefollowingadvicescanhelpyou.Firstinallbelieveinyourself.Yourgreatestproblemisthatyoulackself-confidence.Thefirstthingyoumustdoitistosmileatyourclassmates.Onesmilespeaksloudaboutyourwishtomakefriendsthananyword.Yoursmilewillshowthatyouarefriendlytohim.Nexttryingtalkingwithastudentwhoisasshyasyouorwhosharethesameinterestasyou.Youcandiscussyourstudieswithaclassmateandyoucanalsotalkaboutyourhobbies.Unlessanyoneisintroubleyoushouldbereadytohelphimorher.Onceyouhaveconfidenceyoucanmakeasmanyfriendsaspossibly.YoursLily

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线＼划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分Frankjoinedthearmyaftermiddleschool.Hedidquitewellineverythingbesidesshooting.Onedaythenewsoldierswerepracticedshooting.Frankperformedpoorlywhiletherestwasdoingquitewell.AfterhehadshotatthetargetninetimesbuthadnothitoncetheofficershoutedIhadneverseensuchafool!Don’twastawayyourlastbullet!Gobehindthatwallandshootyourselfwithit!Frankwentbehindawallandafewsecondslatethesoundofashotwasheardbytheofficerandtheothersoldier.Heavens!theofficersaiD.Hasthatsillymanrealdoneso?HeranbehindthewallanxiouslyonlyfindFrankstandingtherestraightsayingI’msorrybutImissedagain.

AboutthreeyearsbeforesomethingterriblyhappenedtomE.Thosesixhourofterrorhavebrokenmybodyorsoul.IttakeslessthanasingledaytochangemyhairfromblacktowhitE.OnedaymybrothersandIwascomingbackfromtheislands.OutboatfullfishAllatoncewewereinaterriblestorm.Ourboatsurvivedmyelderbrotherputhermouthclosetome.andscreamedouttheterrifiedwordWhirlpoolWiththewindandwaveswearegoinginthedirectionofthewhirlpoolandanythingcouldsaveus.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用\划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分OnthefirstdaywhenIwenttohighschoolIfeltexciting.After9years'studyIfeltIwassocloselytouniversity.DuringthefirstyearImademanyfriends.Igottoknowallofmyclassmates.Becausetheschoolworkwastough.Isharedhappinessandsorrowformyfriends.WhensecondyearcameIwasarrangedtootherclass.IwasworriedthatnoonecouldtalktomebutImadenewfriendsquickly.NowitwasthelastyearofmyhighschoollifebutI'mdeterminedtostudymoreharderandmakegreaterprogress.HighschoollifeischallengingformebutIwon'tgiveout.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用＼划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分LastweekweheldaEnglishstory-tellingcompetition.WerequiredthattheentriesbeoriginalandinterestedandbepresentedwithEnglishwithinfiveminutes.Everymembertookanactivelypartintheactivity.TwoforeignEnglishteachersareinvitedtoactasjudges.AtlastLiPingwonfirstplacE.Manymemberssaidtheactivitybenefitedfromtheminmanyways.NotonlydiditimprovedtheirspokenEnglishbutalsoitbroughtthemmanyfun.TheyhopemanysuchactivitycanbeheldinthefuturE.